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Peer Review #1
General advice + reminders
Remember to remove the files that are not required, such as the literature, and update the files that are absolutely necessary to make this repository reproducible.
Regarding ReadMe
This repo provides students with a foundation for their own projects associated with Telling Stories with Data
The file structure is clear, but remember to update the overview. Maybe add a singular line about what the paper aims to do.
LLM Usage
The LLM usage is well detailed and the captions really explain what the LLM is solving for without too much cognitive load. Consider adding LLM as a text file instead.
Filter data for December 2018
Consider placing these commands elsewhere? I'm not sure the readme is the best place for them.
Regarding the Paper
Which population group experiences the most frequent transitions between shelters in 2018 and 2023? An analysis on Toronto’s Shelter System Flow"
I like the concept of the paper posed as a rhetorical question! It makes the reader stop and ponder for a second. Consider moving the second sentence to the subtitle. Maybe it could be reworded into something along the tunes of "Do certain demographics face more shelter displacement than others? An analysis of Toronto's homeless shelter systems.
As Toronto faces an extreme homelessness crisis, it is important to understand how much homelessness has increased in the city in 2023 compared to 2018
Using Precis may be a helpful exercise here. The word homelessness is repeated twice, consider the following: As Toronto faces a debilitating homelessness crisis, it is worth examining the direness of the situation as it stands today compared to 5 years ago.
where between
Omit where in the introduction, second line
city council
Capitalise.
analyze the data separated into eight groups
I love the description of variables of interest in the introduction, and the description of labels.
2018 and 2023
I'm curious about the motivation being picking two years instead of comparing how trends change over the years. Any specific reasons?Consider expanding on this.
2.2 Moved to housing
The definitions here are useful! insightful to have included them.
3.2 Comparisons in between
Omit the word in
Move the graphs up and reduce the space between the text and graphs. Also alter ggplot attributes so the labels are displayed without overlap. Try axis test to rotate the labels.
Homeless
Consider appending the word persons to the barchart label.
3.2 Comparisons between
Perhaps would be useful somewhere to cross reference other sources to determine plausible reasons for these trends, or maybe mention some hypotheses. Left wondering "And then what? Why?"
rising house prices
This is what I was looking for! Critically developing on this would add great worth to the work.
limitations on the project
Limitations 'to' the project
Discussion
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this section. Good work!
More individuals actively homeless
This one sentence is the central thesis to your paper, and definitely packs a punch. Consider using it sparingly, and rewording instead of repeating it, since it loses a little magic that way.
Peer Review
Since the assignment seems to be still under works, here is some comments that may be useful what's given
- Remove the "subtitle if needed line" it's rendered in your pdf
- Remember to finish the abstract, it is "First sentence,..." and so on right now
- I think your fig tags in the writing sections are not rendering, they have a ? in it
- Add a Link to your repo on the bottom of the first page where it says "LINK"
General/Repo Related
- Overall code provided is clean and simple
- Sketches are included as needed
- Test Data script is not added
- Simulate Data has good detail and well-commented
- Make sure to update your README.md file to your specific assignment
- Citations are incomplete, but remember to cite R (important!)
- Data tables, graphs are not added yet but remember to use kable and such tools to generate those, refer to course website
- Data Analysis writing is missing, ensure to include cross references throughout
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