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Hi @gwenchee . I've attached some comments about the second draft. Overall, it looks good, though some care will need to be taken to clean up some issues regarding clarity. Sorry for taking so long to look it over.
This issue can be closed with a pull request that addresses the comments in the attachment above.
@gwenchee : Julia is an undergraduate research assistant this semester who has taken the Stanford MOOC on scientific writing. Her work assignment is to help us with some of the editing tasks by suggesting edits which apply the lessons from that MOOC toward improved grammar, directness, brevity, impact, clarity, etc. I would like this abstract to be her first assignment. I hope this is ok with you.
@juliaroessler Please read the pdf below and make suggestions (either as comments here in this issue or via pull request).
For reference, the checklist:
After my review, here are some comments:
https://github.com/arfc/2019-chee-global/files/3614496/2019-chee-global.pdf
This issue can be closed with a PR that handles them.
This issue can be closed after @katyhuff reviews this draft of my global paper:
chee-global-paper.pdf
Addressing:
This issue can be closed when @katyhuff reviews this global presentation draft. arfc-pres.pdf
This issue can be closed after @katyhuff reviews draft 2 of my global paper:
chee-global-paper.pdf
Hi @gwenchee I forgot about this repo. Did you present this at global 2019? If so, maybe this repo can be public now?
some of the attached scribbles were mentioned in #5 . But, please look over these comments. Sorry so scribbly. This issue can be closed when all scribbles have been addressed and solutions merged in.
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