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我也在考虑怎么误导的问题。但是你要知道,如果你一直说这个人好,突然他就变坏了。读者不会觉得自己理解错了,会觉得你编不下去了,开始瞎写。所以我目前的想法是可以误导,但是绝对不能通过我们的描述来误导,只能通过客观描述,让读者自己理解错误。
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你读过死神Bleach么?那里蓝染队长的黑化是我想要模仿的。我当然不会说把一个人写成高大全,不过现在Michael描写他的机会比较少,前四章剧情比较紧凑。我想先用比较快速的剧情吸引读者注意力。
2013/1/4 Scorpiohw [email protected]
我也在考虑怎么误导的问题。但是你要知道,如果你一直说这个人好,突然他就变坏了。读者不会觉得自己理解错了,会觉得你编不下去了,开始瞎写。所以我目前的想法是可以误导,但是绝对不能通过我们的描述来误导,只能通过客观描述,让读者自己理解错误。
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我准备写完这三章以后好好改一改,暂时不往下写。
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太快了,我现在的感觉就是跟不上。首先不了解你的设定,一下子就变来变去的。感觉太快了。
你要不就尝试用插叙。一上来就说一个引人入胜的时间,然后一点一点在其中穿插前面的内容。否则,你按照自然顺序来写,又要节奏快,感觉思路上很松散,不丰满。
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跟不上是吧,我这几天自己在想也是觉得有这个问题。我自己把设定弄得比较复杂,是不容易搞明白。插叙?你这个suggestion我没有想到,待我好好思考一下。
2013/1/4 Scorpiohw [email protected]
太快了,我现在的感觉就是跟不上。首先不了解你的设定,一下子就变来变去的。感觉太快了。
你要不就尝试用插叙。一上来就说一个引人入胜的时间,然后一点一点在其中穿插前面的内容。否则,你按照自然顺序来写,又要节奏快,感觉思路上很松散,不丰满。—
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你说跟不上,能给几个具体例子么?也让我更明确些。
2013/1/4 Harold Wang [email protected]
跟不上是吧,我这几天自己在想也是觉得有这个问题。我自己把设定弄得比较复杂,是不容易搞明白。插叙?你这个suggestion我没有想到,待我好好思考一下。
2013/1/4 Scorpiohw [email protected]
太快了,我现在的感觉就是跟不上。首先不了解你的设定,一下子就变来变去的。感觉太快了。
你要不就尝试用插叙。一上来就说一个引人入胜的时间,然后一点一点在其中穿插前面的内容。否则,你按照自然顺序来写,又要节奏快,感觉思路上很松散,不丰满。—
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要不,我在序言里再加一些scenes,多解释下背景?
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太快了?我怎么觉得节奏还没上去呢。。
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你今天中午有时间么
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