Comments (2)
Lots of items from the writing checklist should be reviewed again.
- Other misused/overused words include: code, input, output, different, value, amount, model.
- clunky nouns -> spunky verbs (progression, expression --> progress, express)
- reduce vague words (important, methodological)
- get rid of extraneous prepositions (the meeting happened on monday -> the meeting happened monday) (they agreed that it was true -> they agreed it was true)
- get rid of passive voice (is/was/are/were/be/been/am + past tense verb), replace with active voice
- use strong verbs (use sparingly: is, are, was, were, be, been, am)
- avoid turning verbs into nouns ("obtain estimates of" -> "estimates"; "provides a description of" -> "describes") (management of power systems -> power systems management, to the task of net load prediction -> to predict net load, the task of net load forecasting -> to forecast net load)
- don't bury the verb (keep the predicate close to the subject at the beginning of the sentence)
- Always use isotopic notation like
$^{239}Pu$
. Never$Pu-239$ or plutonium-239. - A phrase of the form ion of is probably clearer as ion. (For example, convert "calculation of velocity" to "velocity calculation".)
- Cite all software. Review the principles and try CiteAs if necessary.
- Refer to software consistently by name.
Additional Table and Figure Checklist:
- When referring to figures by their number, use
Figure 1
andTable 1.
They should be capitalized and not abbreviated (notfig. 1
orfigure 1
.)
Additional Math Comments
- define all variables, with units. If unitless, indicate that this is the case
$[-]$
. - Variables should be defined in the
align
environment as well, not buried in paragraphs.
Hereβs an example of an equation:
The line is defined as
\begin{align}
y&=mx + b
\intertext{where}
y&= \mbox{ height of the line, also known as rise [m]}\nonumber\\
m&= \mbox{ slope [-]}\nonumber\\
x&=\mbox{ independent parameter, known as run [m]}\nonumber\\
b&= \mbox{ y intercept [m].}
\end{align}
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I am going to close this issue (because my review is now complete). But, I'll open a new issue, assigned to you (@samgdotson), which can be closed with updates to the paper.
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